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Becoming Dark Venus

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Laying in the comforts
of my private sanctuary
Being the Goddess,
worshipped by the peasant men
Beloved Venus,
Goddess of all Goddesses,
to seduce, to control, to take
Mother of temptresses
Founder of enchantresses

Skin is not the ghostly image fair skin,
but a lively chocolate tone of youth
Hair not like the rays of sun
but black as raven feathers,
reflecting lights
as if stars woven into every strand
the dark sister of the Roman's beauty,
far more alluring,
far more mysterious

One glance,
makes a man stop in his tracks
One smile,
makes a man melt in his place
One touch,
torments a man to a blissful servitude
Making him quiver with such desire
Making him yearn, crave for more
yet just simple gestures of interest
Drive him to the hell's end, and at heaven's gates
The dark Venus,
The beautiful Medusa
Letting a the night fill with his scream of tranquility
A tranquility of reaching his own peak,
what evil creatures women can become,
how amusing yet excruciating we truly are
Then along with the rising of the sun,
your dark Venus
vanishes, leaving the sinful man of lust
waiting by the window, looking out
as every moon rises, if his Dark Goddess of pleasure
Arrives

Mother of feminine sexuality,
What has possessed me to be such a feline?
To be as free as the wind
accepting all the gifts given to me
being what I truly am
A woman, a lady, a complete female
A dark Goddess, and Venus's twin sister of the night
dont know, just started writing...so in the third stanza i purposely change the writting style to make it like a third person view affect to see how it sounds..i think it turned out nice, but not to sure if this is considered erotic..so whatever ppl just enjoy it :)
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Blue-Bard's avatar
Nice diversion from your usual tone - that image of raven feathers and hair is delicious, as well as the ghostly image of fair skin (succulent). I think you've succesfully summed up the powerful mystery of the female species. Write on girl.